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With Holding Hands

Three friends,
One bond,
And one heart.
Nothing can tare then apart.

They're safe,
With eachother.
Nothing can break them.

A couple fights,
Here and
There,
But nothing they
Can't bare.

With every tear,
And every fear,
They'll never
Walk that path
Alone.

With holding
Hands,
And brave hearts,
They will never be apart,
Even with a distance.

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