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50 Second Downpour

What is this?
Where am I?
What am I doing here?
In this light
I have to fight
There's no reason for the fear

In here lies a girl
Whose heart is wanting to explode
Take the tenderness
She wishes to extend. Behold
The life this girl leads
Do you see her in the mirror?
A cup full of former self
Dying to get nearer?

clearer
dearer
they fear her?
it seers her
looking for a sign
the road map's all wrong?
what's the matter this time?

She knows that it may be
That they don't feel the same
Oh well then, she's the one who's real
Let them play their game

Take away and seal
The peaces /pieces./
They've br/o/ken
one by one

Will they ever
clever?
endeavor?
sever?
through the shades of the darkest sun?

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(2003)

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  • Wow hun this was beautiful
    ..made me think as I pondered
    while trying to answer the
    questions in my head
    from my own inner
    personal self-doubt
    and questioning.

    loved this piece

    thank you for such
    a fulfilling write