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Two Souls Left Astray...xXx

Demonic screams ring through the night,
Much to the poor angel's fright,
He screams in foreign-tangled tongue,
Of which the angel heard among,
Soft whips of harmonious-poetic speech,
Then the angel thought of ways to teach,
The angered devil inscriptions of love,
Descended only from above,
Her enchanted voice was that of purity,
His thoughts were those of utmost obscurity,
Bright flash of light left both astray,
Blinded by the Earth's new day,
She sought to maim this tortured beast,
Then eat his unholiness as her grand feast,
Rid this world of twisted hate,
Her words of wise were battered fate,
The poor demon didn't know,
He didn't recognize her puppeteer-ed show,
He was captured by her glowing essence,
Her radiant beauty and luminescence,
She  lay a smooth-dainty finger on the creature,
Now his evil-corrupted teacher,
You see the death and lovely duet,
Hath now switched both persona asset,
Once guardian angel now turned deathly,
Is opposing of the demon oh-so earthly,
Now both switched in to place of maddened world gone sublime,
Is grandly a thing that brought beast and angel together forever in time.

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  • Nickelspring gold member
    October 20

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    I enjoyed how you created a story for the pic- in rhyme!
    Nicely done!
    Best wishes,
    K

  • Baldwin
    May 14

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    i like it it definitely fits the picture, though the meter can seem off at times, im not sure if you meant to do that though. Thank you for the read

  • This is lovely. Very well written. I enjoyed the flow and it went well with the prompt. Thank you for entering and thanks for sharing.