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[ Punching, Screaming, Scoring and Assists, ]

Punching, Screaming, Scoring and Assists,

With John Curry, Dustin Jeffrey, and Paul Bissonnette

Dancing, Screaming, die hard fans,

Going to hockey games, and cancelling plans

Luca, Joey, And Ben to

All make the Bears go Poo Poo

With Connor,Mark, And Jeff Combined,

all hypnotize the Tiger's Minds

Finishing off the PERFECT team,

can always cream the opposite team

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  • Polaja Greeters member
    May 12
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    Welcome to AllPoetry!

    This is a great poem, I really like the way you have expressed this, it is so fun and the reader can really feel the excitement behind your words I just wanted to welcome you to the site, I hope that you enjoy your time here at AllPoetry!


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