Biting his lip,
he shimmied up her exactness,
unzipping her intentions
an inch at a time –
a time without treason;
a selection without will;
an exposure for the thrill
of it all, and she knew it...
© Nublin’s Pub, 2009
Author notes
Another Fred Ashcock inspired moment...
Chubba Art - http://chubbaart.deviantart.com/art/Unzip-the-Truth-109774955
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This is hot without being sleazy.
"a selection without will;
an exposure for the thrill" - This sums up passion perfectly and subtley. Great stuff.
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Unzipping her intentions, that is much more sensual than ripping gripping velcro, a saucy, sassy and self- assured poem, especially liked the pacing of an inch at a time replacing usual clock-faced time.
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What a gem. I'm with Cat, there's something so delicious about the word shimmy. The entire piece just rolls of the tongue.
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ooooooooh. smokin'.
a time without treason - dayum
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love the word shimmied.. has great
visual attachments--
such a great little piece
the poem
not her.. not that she isn't. but i don't know her.. right?
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oh, I think we all know her pretty well - fine piece of work. shimmy 'round the table and see what happens when ya put your glass down.
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where's the grenade?
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at home in my shorts' pocket waiting for an appropriate time to pull the pin...
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