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The Gamble

Long  silver barrel
Click
Polished wooden Handel
Click
Spinning the cylinder
Click
Half way there
Click
Starting to sweat
Click
Feeling regret
Bang

A contest entry

funny or tragic? why?

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • Jfd
    May 13

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    russian roulette? way to take the prompt and making it interesting, I felt the increasing intensity with every "click", thanks for taking the time to enter!


  • DecorusApparatus
    May 11

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    Brillian work Nanu.
    I am totally impressed.
    Hopefull you'll write more soon!!
    I'm pleased to hear from you.
    Big hugs ♥

    --Katie.


  • DramaQueen469 gold member
    May 11

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    I think it's funny and tragic lmao

    "handle" is spelt like that

    I love you, and I enjoyed this!

    Maria