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To be with you

I'm going off to bed now
might as well, the time is right
what else am I supposed to do
at this time of the night?

Been up for eight hours now
It must be time to go
Back to the place I know is safe
And time will freely flow.

Until I have to start again
Another day, so full of pain
Agonising, what to do
And yearning to be with you.


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  • Mantha
    May 12, 2009

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    This is super hun. It flows nicely and I liked the rhyme structure.
    The small hours of the night are always sad and lonely sometimes sleep is the best place to be.
    Love and light fellow poet.