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What a pity i bought kitty

Oh what a pity,
That i just bought a new kitty,
Her features i did so adore

At first it was such fun
To watch how she slid when she run
Across the slippery kitchen floor

But kitty thinks it a joke
Mums best vase she has just broke
Replacing it will make me so poor

Nanna's ball of wool is but string
Such heartache, she does bring
And emotional stress, i have it galore

Kitty has caused me so much strife
And after just one week in my life
I am chucking kitty out the back door..

So if you find my little kitty
And think her antics are so witty
Then please take her, i want her no more.


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  • Poor Kitty, do you think you could give her a second chance? This is quite the adorable poem, and it was a pleasure to read. Best of luck in my contest, and thanks for entering.