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Judgmental Reflection

What are you looking at? a Sinner?
Dead distant stars accuse, but what are they to glimmer
At me, silver-white salt pillar?

Holy heavens do pray, think Abraham’s Sands
pose Want for Judgment Day.
Yet who are they to judge? The Artist blames his hands
for the ugliness of his drudge:
Just Conscience is Man’s jail.
The penance is the nail.

You too can accuse, but who are you to talk?
Indeed, I am just a Mirror
of you, a Man, a Sinner.

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  • Welcome To AllPoetry

    *giggles* I couldn't help but laugh at this picture. The poem itself is great. Wonderful ending. We are all sinners, so that is something we should all keep in mind. Great work. Thanks for sharing.

    Welcome to the Site.
    Kahy


  • Polaja Greeters member
    May 12
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    Welcome to AllPoetry!

    This is a great poem, I really like the way you have expressed this, it has an interesting message, and I love the picture that you chose to go with it I just wanted to welcome you to the site, I hope that you enjoy your time here at AllPoetry!


    Polly
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