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Reminded and Open Minded

Blood infused with health and vitality
Atoms pulsing with energy
drawn from the roots of inner wisdom
Integral serenity washes the body
and mind clean from ignorance and disease

Through neglect...

Sickness invades and irradicates
without knowledge to heal

Yet universal inherent knowledge
bestowed by impulse through stars
and creative urge ensures that
spaces inheritance and love
are ours from the beginning

So that when...

A hand encloses a silver blade
and slices it through pliant wood
an object of beauty is formed
Such talent is not learned but born

Preceeding time...

Wisdom to see arises with experience
Life school nurtures with its mirror
offering galaxies of treasure

Incalculable and indelible...

Fingerprints etched within my psyche
ensure my whole simply knows
yet enhancement through discipleship
is profound enough to reinvent me
drawing me closer to myself

And magical growth...

Trees are gracious
freely giving substance for books
Beautiful, astounding books
that help me to grow
Professors and all teachers
graciously guide those seeking
The ones thirsty for knowledge

Hungry students...

And teachers may be taught far more for
they are reminded and are open minded


Author notes

In order to transform into the state of mind that enhances my writing I choose certain music and in this case credit is due to Lama Gyurme and Jean-Phillipe Rykiel for their songs 'Rain of Blessings' and 'Offering Chant'.

They're not only generous musicians but wondrous teachers!

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  • parenchma
    July 17
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    Sounds like you are feeling much better these days?

  • A beautiful poem illustrating of our innate knowledge. Yes, there is ancient knowledge to remember, indeed.

  • This piece speaks volumes of your understanding of the fundamentals for growth and enlightenment!

  • i think you are growing all the time G ,, IN WISDOM AND HEART..lovely poem..peter

  • a great piece with spritual wisom bursting from the page lovely work. ps your pic is very trippy thought i was having a lsd flash back

  • Absolutely beautiful. very well written. An excellent write as usual from you.


    • aslanlight
      May 13
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      Thanks J, can you see any reason why it might have been removed?


  • Balldinger silver member
    May 12

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    good steps

    rich with wisdom. over flowing with ambient thought and awareness. open mindedness - a better place to be than the one with drawn sides to hold everything in and everything else out.

  • a journey

    A quest here seems in a perpetual search for learning
    and enlightenment of the self through
    the open portal of minds and creations mysteries.
    We live, we see, we learn, we move on with the rhythm
    of life...touching earth, fire and water and then the intangible soul...


  • hawkeslake gold member
    May 11

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    The first stanzas are almost ethereal, more mystical in tone. The poem grows more accessible when you move to the tangible (like the hand knows how to wield the knife from beyond time). The philosophical reflection here is lovely, touching on the outer and inner realities of existence, the importance of knowing self, but finding teachers and using discipline, to truly learn. Thought-provoking. Lita


  • Raspy
    May 11

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    10 stars

    A magnificent piece in height,depth and breath. An incredibly summarised spiritual truth. No one could have written this with such precision,wisdom
    And incredible grace.

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