Its cold and dark outside,
And all I can hear is the screaming,
And all i can see is their suffering.
Cant I have change this?
Can't I do something to make them stop ?
Now they are here drowning,
Drowning in a pool I help let them fill
Filled with the thing that can kill.
I should stop them ,
Save them from these addictions,
Protected them from the effects
And help them find they're way back.
But I am just sitting here
Watching them drown.
I am just walking away and saying nothing
If I had could say something
That something could have save their lives
And maybe they think i have no right to tell them what to do,
And I think I have no right
But their lives are in my hands.
And I must help them now
Help them from drowning more
Help them from killing themselves more everyday.
Author notes
umm this may not make a lot of sense.. but oh well. lol.
Written March 11th, 2004
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This is my favorite!!!!!!! I love this poem sooo much.. This is the coolest ever! wow! I am going to print this out and it will be so cool!! Thanks for sharing..
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this is a really good poem macey. i dont know if i know who this is about but..its really good.
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holy, this is beautiful macey. i can just feel the emotion in this. it is very sad but it is an excellent poem. i hope that this situation gets better for you! great write! --kylee
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Great job.
This is a really good poem... I think I can relate to it a bit too, which is good too. I think.
Keep it up. goes to read more
- Nicki -
hello there,
GOOD JOB MACEY!!!!!!!!! seriously, this is a great poem! it's very sad and i know that a lot of people on here will be able to relate to this..good job dogg!!!!! love ya!
-ellen
HAHA
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