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Fresno all curled up

All curled up
on my bed.
She's so cute!
All snuggled up in a ball.
Could humans ever do that?
Could a human ever be as cute as a cat?
"Mrrow. Mrrow," I heard Fresno meow drowsily.
When she looked up at me, I could see the slight grin on her face.
Is that even possible?
I could see the sparkle in her emerald green eyes,
the gentle expression on her face,
the kindness,
the soothing fur of her's.
What was so comforting about Fresno, and just cats in general?
Is it because we can tell them whatever we want and they'll listen?
Is it because of their calm self?
Are they, in a way, human?
Probably.
Most likely.
Without any doubt in my mind.
Cats, in most ways, are human.

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  • mcope8050
    June 5

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    ohhhhh how sweet

    how adorable is FRESNO,,,, VERY VERY ADORABLE,,,, well written and the imagery INTRODUCED me to FRESNO,,, thank you for sharing this with us

  • aw...u luv ur cat dont u!!!godd luck in the contest!

  • A really excellent poem you have penned here. Best of luck in my contest, and thanks for entering.