Have you ever seen the feathery encased seeds of the dandelion being blown off and carried away by the wind into the air, all hoping to land at the right place?
flying through the air
protected by my love
my thoughts of you
Author notes
This is my first try at Haibun.
A contest entry
- Group Contest Haiku Senryu And Tanka and Lovers of Oriential Art by Draig aine.
2250 points, ended May 21, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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oh how lovely
I like it reminds me a bit of me, they call it a tanku a mix of tanka and haiku, not classical but it works for me
as they say haiku on , thank you for entering my contest best of luck
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Hi Drag aine
Thank you. A tanku? There's no adventure without pushing back the boundaries.
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excellent~
Excellent ku
Best of luck in the contest
I did one about dandelions too..LOL
Do hope you come give mine a read as well
Nice to meet as well
Susan~~~
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Hi Susan
Thank you and nice to meet you although I think I have read you before. Looks like we both like dandelions and I will definitely read yours.
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And A Wonderful...
first try at that. This is a nice picture you have painted poet.
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Hi Macsword
Thank you for the encouragement.
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I like this, it's so cute!!!
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Hi Gothic Butterfly
Thank you.
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