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Welcome In, Ghost

Ghost-Friend, this chill in the air

   could only be from You-

 my soul shudders in Your presence

 of Your omnipotence.

   He acknowledges You know

   his private scary things.

 

   Then You rest an ethereal hand

  on an earthly heart

 

and nothing else matters.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Bob Fox silver member
    July 12

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    I

    In my little presuptions see the reality of life as an abundance of lies and drivel. The carnage and gallantry sacrificede to attain our goal of survival. Leat we be less then human.


  • awannabepoet
    July 2
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    You know to some that would be scary for some prefer the comfort of not having to care, not having to love unconditionally, some even want to do harm, some want to kill others will live in your shrills.

    To me this speaks of a presence we all know so well, it comes from our very soul, it is the purest of outwardly expressions of our very selves.

    I like it, I like it so!


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    May 15

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    Humm..this is very curious work and the message as well..even so..it brings the depth and the thoughtfulness to the communication you did..well done...


  • mysterious.angel
    May 15
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    i wonder what your ghost is? what are you fighting off exceptional write you did wonderful on this.

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