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"Miracle In Reverse" (Feb 2009)

"Miracle In Reverse" (Feb 2009)

I’m Willing To Sacrifice
My Own Heartache
For Your Happiness
But When You Realize
It’s All A Mistake
Nothing Has Changed
I Only Ask That
You Don’t Ask For Me Back
Everything Won’t Be Alright
Won’t Be Just Fine
That Knowing At One Time
I Was Second In Your Eyes
Recap The Past
When You Blew Your Chance
If You Feel You Can
Be Happier With Him
Happier Than With Me
Then I Will Let You Be
I Will Set You Free
But Please Don’t Come Crying Back To Me
When Things Aren’t What You Thought They Be

Justin Michael Milani

Author notes

one of those poems where it's hard to accept someone knowing that you werent their first pic. It's like how can you be with someone when you know in the back of your mind that you were second choice

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  • ouch... to be made to feel second choice is such a stabbing feeling. you did well with the shorter lines, laid out in almost a 'how to deal with being second' self-help book.

  • wow very emotion filled. And I too can relate to this one. wonderful job dear poet. And I love the picture too. Great job and keep it up.

    Always write from the heart
    Never give up
    Kate

  • I like this one. I can really relate to it. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.

    ~Kayla

  • great

    very good write...it hurts when you arent the first pick....I can relate very well to this write...good job..