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Autumn Raine

I would give it all just to have your eternity
To make you feel for me although im wrong
I wrap you up in promises of forever
and our goodbyes are never for long

I fear nothing but what comes after death
You fear only people, storms and pain
I cant understand your strange quiet mind
sometimes I question if you are sane

I carefully evaluate the smile thats on your face,
try to see if tears hide behind your eyes
I would never forgive this thing I call myself
If I bruised again where my heart lies...

You will never know all the thoughts that run
through my bruised and broken mind
You will never know all the things I`ve done
and all the things I used to hide

I dont remember what was said
or all the tears we cried
I just wanted you to know Im here
until you say goodbye.








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  • Kumori Kasei
    July 31

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    This reminded me so much of a friend that I lost. I almost cried reading it...very touching, I recognized my own feelings within it <3

  • Chris D
    May 11

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    Heartwarming

    Love and selfless dedication are wonderful things particularly if you can let them go when the demand is made of you. Really like this.

    Chris

  • sometimes i wonder if i am the only sane person alive in this era - then i start dribbling after the orderlies inject me - a good poem.