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A Teacher's Senyru

 

 

cough chills sore throat
couch beckons embraces heals  
sick days in may

 

 

 

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I sure wish this sickness would go away!

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  • Draig aine gold member
    May 21

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    a most excellent senyru

    true to the facts of life, have a teenager, all colds come home even when homework does not get her, liked very much thank you for entering my contest best of luck


  • BonnieQ silver member
    May 11

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    Sick Days Would be Great if One Weren't Sick!

    Awww, sweet Sis, I am praying you get better quickly! Order the tincture "Asafetida" put out by Natures Answer: it will kill viruses, etc.

    As usual, you are the master of haiku and senryu, and this one just proves it again! Excellent, so vivid it almost made me take to the sofa This should be awarded the GOLD, hands down!

    Much love & hugs, SisBon

    • Thank you Sis

      I am a bit better....the fever is going away and the cough is calming down....asafetida is the best!

      - joanne -