I could↔be
lying there in his bed with him,
his arms
A
R D me
O N
U
his
b r e a t h
in my ear,
his .masculinity. pressed
against my inner thighs
extravagant ♦ promises
brushing away my (cares)
his hold like a FORTRESS
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬
He could↔be
brushing my hair through
his↨hands
brushing my cheek with his
f/i/n/g/e/r/t/i/p/s
§[his skin warming my own]§
░clinging░ like a raging f.e.v.e.r
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬
We could↔be
/t~a~n~g~l~e~d together\
-pressed- ↑between↓ the sheets
hearts♥racing in p*e*r*p*e*t*u*a*l motion
making LOVE like it had been
waiting... for us to find each other,
&& §--intertwine--§
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬
Addiction ► clinging to
s i l k y
w-h-i-s-p-e-r-s
in the █ shelter █ of the
darkness....
your SCENT enveloping me
in a h a z e of
◘fiery◘ mirage
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬
I could↔be
beside him,
holding him and ∟caressing√his chest
r_u_b_b_i_n_g his skin
He could↔be
behind me,
hands •around• my waist
fingers -exploring-
lips ►clinging◄ to my neck
teeth ΩgrazingΩ my skin
t~i~n~g~l~i~n~g
D
O
W
N
my body
We could↔be
♥ loving
§ twisting
‡ twining
Ω grazing
‼ grasping
¤ gasping
↑ surfacing
◘ breathing
ö beating
√ brushing
╒ feeling
♫ floating
...
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬
two↔become↔one
under the silver☼moon
together
[embracing] the love♥ we share
our♥love
been waiting so _l_o_n_g_
for this moment, finally
r/e/a/c/h/i/n/g the stars
and beyond ---
together
holding hands,
holding hearts,
sold souls
☺ laughing
◘ touching
√ holding
♦ kissing
♥ loving
we fit↔perfectly in each other
complimenting↔opposites
he fills my empty█soul
soothes my aching♥heart
reaches out to ‡touch‡ my depths
&& heal •me•
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A contest entry
- ♫☺☻♪Dirty Pretty♪♥☻☺♫ by xVamPirexMusiCx.
500 points, ended June 29, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - CALLING ALL DIRTY PRETTY by Menna.
800 points, ended May 31, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ADULT Prewrite Contest! Gold, Silver or Bronze Winning Pieces Only!!! by cybilseyes.
700 points, ended July 9, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very engaging write! Thanks for your entry best of luck!
xo
Cyb -
COOL! Nice write, tanks for entering, liked your style of dirty pretty ^_^
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WOW! This is exactky what I wanted for my gold winner good luck!
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wow its amazing. really loved it.
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this was indeed unique. i found it a little hard to read but there is alot of love here and I admire love above all things
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I found this to be very unique. It holds a lot of passion and love. Love is a wonderful feeling and you expressed it well. Thanks for sharing and well done.
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amazing. I dont really like Dirty Pretty, but this kept me in the moment the whole time. Very vivid and full of very naughty images
keep it up
-Raven
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Wow. I really like this. I'm a lesbian so I'm not necessarily into the guy part here but I love this nonetheless because it's good. I like the style with all the symbols. Haha I'm especially wondering how you got the female sign on there cause I wanna link two together on my page lol. But anyways I think you've done well here.
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Superb Plus
I think 'tis a fine write, just as it is. I like your unique format, and the use of various symbols. They add to the sensuality of the poem. Thanks for sharing this one.
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