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Transcendence

No one who believes
That the next world is more important
Than this one
Can be trusted
With an atomic bomb

Or do you disagree?

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  • luvdrkchocolate
    May 14

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    Wow. That's one way to put it. Can it be trusted with an atomic bomb? I don't know what to say. I'll have to think about that and get back to you!


  • chills gold member
    May 11

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    Completely right. An incontrovertible truth if ever I heard one. I hope Langanipa never invents one. Must get back to The Tractor. It's been hellish here for the last couple of weeks. Hope you are well and happy my dear Vic. x D


  • Maldronah
    May 11
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    Apres moi, le Deluge.