I
&sometimes I wish I could f a d e away
Find a place under a willow tree
Never be [seen] again.
Tear away the necklace that holds me to you,
c.a.r.v.e out the part of my that misses your touch.
II
Do you remember staying up all night talking about nothing but lullabees and lust?
Remember your hand on my .hip. the spark that ignited -between- us?
Do you remember when it stopped being about me and you?
When it became about me and you [you and her] [me and him]
&all of our other random fucks?
III
They say slippery hands can't be blamed for when things start to get blurry,
Tell me something love♥ when did we start to dissipate?
I remember the --->rush<--- being filled with desire and intrigue,
Why does everything good always have to go away?
IV
So here's the thing, "doll"
I never was and never will be yours.
I'm done giving out second chances,
Cause lets be honest,
Once you get to the fifth and the sixth
Nobody takes you seriously.
So peace out, goodbye, whatever.
Yeah, I remember that conversation oh-so-very well dear.
You know how it went.
"It's over."
"Okay. Whatever. Bye"
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Fairy Dust.
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- Dirty Pretty Inspiration. by PaperChainHearts.
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Wow Jules, you haven't written in so long!
III
They say slippery hands can't be blamed for when things start to get blurry,
Tell me something love♥ when did we start to dissipate?
I remember the --->rush<--- being filled with desire and intrigue,
Why does everything good always have to go away?
I loved that. Seriously. But I hate that break ups are bad 99% of the time.
Gahhhhhh
Iloveyouuuuu
Soph
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I love love love this bbydoll. The ending is just perfect
So much of this is just too true.
"Why does everything good always have to go away?"
^^^^^^^^^^^I have no idea why bby, but I wish it wouldn't.
"Do you remember staying up all night talking about nothing but lullabees and lust?"
^^^^^^^^^^^^I love that line. I'd been missing those days for a while, but that's just how my last few nights have been spent
I hate it when guys who don't deserve us have such a hold on us that we'll put up with anything. It's so nice to finally break that connection and find someone who treats us right.
ilysfm
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YAYYYY I HAVN'T READ YOUR POETRY FOR TOO LONG!!
Tear away the necklace that holds me to you
-my god; it's been forever and you are still so damn brilliant.
c.a.r.v.e out the part of my that misses your touch.
-i like the dp in 'carve'.
I'm done giving out second chances,
Cause lets be honest,
Once you get to the fifth and the sixth
Nobody takes you seriously.
-fucking magnificent, and just how i remember you.
god; i've missed this.
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Ohh, I like this ever-so-much. Very good !
" Do you remember staying up all night talking about nothing but lullabees and lust?
Remember your hand on my .hip. the spark that ignited -between- us? "
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