I can't keep looking back pretending you're holding my hand,
I can't close my eyes just to imagine what will never be.
Remember when I said hearts don't break they shatter,
Well baby, I meant every syllable that ever escaped my lips.
Which is more than I can say for you and oh-so-clever lies,
Tell me something doll, when was the last time you looked in my eyes?
Does the image of me f
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g
reinstate your hope that we're 'meant to be'.
God baby, have I not taught you anything?
You and me always ends up you, me and [her]
Call me crazy, call me whatever you please.
I managed to leave love triangles back in high school,
Along with the drama of being a tease.
Down those shots sugar quicker than quick,
We both know tonight's just another night to regret.
I'm insecure and you're always around,
I'll forget you in the morning doll,
We both know I've got that one down.
I'll take that shot, maybe just one more,
I promise to let you know when I'm about to hit the floor.
That neverland of tequila and fears is starting to appear.
So tell me love, how many more until you disappear?
Don't say this is love darling, we know I only lust after you.
Wide eyed and naive, I'm not good at saying no,
Especially not to you and you know that too.
So hurry up now baby before I start to believe,
That maybe, just maybe, I can be more than what you expect of me.
Please tell me what you think
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wow. amazing poem. i absolutely loved it! great work
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Tell me something doll, when was the last time you looked in my eyes?
Does the image of me f
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reinstate your hope that we're 'meant to be'.
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Wow, this is really good. I am absolutely in love with this poem. Good write. Sometimes it is so hard to say no to a person. I hope you find someone who will treat you write. Absolutely love this poem!
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AMAZING POEM CUDOS TO YOU
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i loved it. amazingly amazing. lol
love the falling line.
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amazing
this was sucha beautiful write, i luv your style. i could so relate to this and just hear your tone in my head...magic
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this is amazing. i love the first line and the last two the most.
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Oh god, I can so relate to this.
"That maybe, just maybe, I can be more than what you expect of me."
Love that.
The
"f
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bit I didn't really like, since I've read so many poems, some dirty pretty and others not, like that.
But still, a gorgeous poem.
- wintergirl;
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I think that a lot of people can relate to this, and thats a good thing. This poem was outstanding and very strong. I very much enjoyed reading it. Amazing write
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god bby I love this and it's so fucking true. I've soo been here before. Alcohol and insecurity don't mix too well =/
I love love love the way you write because it's so...real.
Amazing babydoll.
ilysfm
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I can't keep looking back pretending you're holding my hand
-i simply adore that starting line.
Well baby, I meant every syllable that ever escaped my lips.
Which is more than I can say for you and oh-so-clever lies
-stupid boys and their stupid lies.
does the image of me falling reinstate your hope that we're 'meant to be'.
-fucking outstanding. i mean come on, this is great.
I'm insecure and you're always around
-oh my gosh, i love that. it's so concise and just emphasies the situation and mood a thousand times.
I promise to let you know when I'm about to hit the floor.
-have i told you i miss your poetry?
by the way; where've you been?!
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thanks bby.
I have this curse where I can't write very well when I'm happy actually. So when my ex wrote me all this shit yesterday I found myself pretty inspired :]
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Great write...
i love the sarcasm, and cynicism in this piece... i have definitely been here before...
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Oohhh this is awfully good doll !
" I'll forget you in the morning doll,
We both know I've got that one down.
I'll take that shot, maybe just one more,
I promise to let you know when I'm about to hit the floor. " Fav' bit
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wow i really like thisit's really vivid and i can relate
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wow i really like thisit's really vivid and i can relate
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