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Imperfect Beauty

I'm not perfect
I'll never be
But I can see the beauty inside of me

My features are stunning
My heart so true
I tried and failed to give it to you

My flaws apparent
My imperfections as plain as day
I should have known you'd throw my heart away

Author notes

The part about features is not narcissistic, it's more showing appreciation for herself and accepting herself as she is. In general I just kind of came up with this. It's rather simple but it describes how I feel. I'll probably develop it into another poem later but this is my rough work for now.

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  • saltine796
    May 11
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    Bravo!

    A very good message here, and I'm so glad you can appreciate these things in yourself. You're a good person and a beautiful person, and I have faith that you'll get past this difficult stage in your healing. I know what you're going through, and I'm here to help in any way I can. The words are very well arranged, and I love this piece. Keep up the good work, and hold your chin up.

    ~Andy