life of a rich woman,
spending her wealth,
no cares at all
living, judging, acting on a whim
buying overpriced alcohol
wasting away
neglecting her talents
but she began to descend so deep
not a friend to call on
nor a pot to piss in
mighty deranged,
without a uncertainty
realizing nobody needs you
when you're down and out
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CURRENT!
This poem describes alot of todays A-list female celebrities. And if they we're to read this poem that actually, probably, hopefully will gain some kind of common sense/sanity because ain't no way in hell they still have it. With that being said effective and intense poem. Very, very well written. The only thing I would advise is for the poem to be longer and obtain more depth. For example, going into the personal personal life of the rich girl and showcasing how everyone judges her, but how wrong they may be she is just as blindsided. But overall good piece!
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Wow, what a powerful and
deeply intense take on the
prompt with raw visuals
and language to express
emotional states.
Nicely conveyed.
Best of luck
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