Speedy dopamine inducing ink scratch
against the dilated pores of my exposed
skin, dripping in pretentious patterns.
The over-amped palpitations beat into
my head her sacred promise, echoing
through the paranoid shadows of my
past markings.
I can't help but black out.
Author notes
based upon:
"Carnal Envelop" by Vic4U @ deviantArt
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Wow, this was dark yet
beautifully scribed.
Great use of visuals
and concepts.
Best of luck
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Genious.
Brilliant. -
wonderful take on the prompt; "dripping ink in pretentious patterns."
Love that line
Best of luck to you
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Nicely writ.
Good luck!
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dripping ink in pretentious patterns.
i really liked that line.
niceeeness.
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