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The Palest Pink Moon

The night was wrapped
in a glow from a far away moon,
painted the palest pink as it sliced
into the dark of the evening sky.

It's shimmering light drizzled
champagne waterfalls of liquid
stars falling from his eyes.  
I drank in the fluidity of his
body language as he moved closer
to me. Swimming in the ambrosia
of his provocative molasses, 
that caressed every curve of my mind.

He was wearing sleek with sexy
on the nakedness of his brown skin.
The hard rock of his body played
electric guitar with my senses,
turning moist into wet between
my thighs.

His lips crushed rose petals
onto my tongue as I licked the taste
of him into my lips.
He teased my desire with his tongue,
opening me artfully, crashing tidal waves
over me, licking the inside out of me,
until the height of my ecstasy
could subside...

The night wrapped itself around us,
while the far away moon shared

in our afterglow,
painted the palest pink as it sliced
into two hearts new in love.

Author notes

Prompt: The Moon Was Full and We Were New In Love.
My muse has been very stubborn with me lately, but slowly we have begun to write again. Always my inspiration for writing has been love and I am a moon child, so this one was a must. It took hours to penn the details that had so cleverly played over and over again in my mind. I think I've captured the passion that lovers under the moon should display...at least I think I have. You be the judge!!!! Thanks for the prompt!!!!

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  • Swan song gold member
    May 25
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    His lips crushed rose petals
    onto my tongue as I licked the taste
    of him into my lips.

    this was awesome

    but then perhaps u tried to hard with the rest of the stanza

    He teased my desire with his tongue,
    opening me artfully, crashing tidal waves
    over me, licking the inside out of me,
    until the height of my ecstasy


    the first was enough

  • kdook76
    May 15

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    This reminds me of the excitement of a brand new love, the passion of figuring each other out, physically and otherwise. Nice.


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    May 15

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    This is so beautiful , the passion and champagne waterfalls . Really nice journey. Thank you for sharing.

  • I'm not sure what the palest pink moon is - but I sure wish it would shine itself around here! Other than that, this was a glorious journey from the sensitive, through the sensual, on to the erotic and ending perfectly with the afterglow of a cigarette! Well written and welcome back!


  • Sara Khan
    May 11

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    Well captured passion! Tha diction is so poetic and suggestive! A poem that fascinates from start till the end. Excellent write, my dear!


  • Mr.
    May 10
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    Excellent. I love the line about champagne waterfalls.


  • tomisb
    May 10

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    My, I would love to see you under the bonfire glories of a harvest moon how bright the forest would resound with you.

    I love the sensual language, the way you weave the senses around your words so the reader is enticed, seduced and then set fire with matches of your imagery. It is easy to say, but hard to portray. The vibrant immediacy you bring to this poem would be lost if you did not have the deft palette of a poets kaleidescope of words and the clear understanding of the sensations aroused. Remind me sometime to share a few of my moon and moon light poems with you.
    Love
    Tom B.

  • Nice to see you back and writing, this is beautifully sentimental C


    • nevadapoet
      May 10

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      Hello there lady!!!! How the hell are you? Yes, thank you for the welcome back...it has been months. My muse was a stubborn bitch this stretch...I could'nteven write a complete sentence, let alone write poetry. It still feels awkward and isn't flowing naturally yet, but I'm working on it.
      So I've heard that you have been traveling...how was your trip? How does it feel to be back home? Anything exciting happen while on your adventure?
      Good to hear from you...thanks for the read. I'll return the favor.

      Be Well,
      Shelly

      • The trip was amazing plenty of things happened, all the pics are on facebook so feel free to go bore yourself to death with the thousands lol I hate being home!!!!

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