Nice boots
I said to the moons lazy eye; which rolled out of the sky, raining
equations all the way down. I watched as they melted ants that were
marching to war drums.
All the evidence disappearing with each invisible footprint, if there
ever were any to begin with.
.
So I wouldn't assume that equals love
thus with that said I kept on walking, among the gental giants who were
flicking me off in their star shaped pattern; the basic shape of the night's
blanket.
Thank you and when you hit them they spilled out whiskey in little alphabet
letters, crumpling by the sight of euphoria, who was now as dull as the last
words spoken by a dumb henchman. Which was ?, nothing.
..
Ah! So a muscle of sorts? Literally speaking,
those words written on his chest spoke of explosives and how they
beat with each breath a poisioned apple. Makes for good lemonade to
drown the white rabbit.
Maybe on the off chance he might suck you into a black hole upside down
or worse the Queen of Hearts for she doesn't know anything about mercy.
Statistics show that it doesn't happen very often, so not to worry.
...
It would be good for the health if there was no gravity
knowing you could just fly away from the vaccine shots from the twenty
million who are suffering knowing that they have already been dead a thousand
times anyways.
That is just the characteristics of being a zombie I am speaking of.
What, oh wait a minute YOU thought I was speaking of something else
entirely?
....
We need closure though don't we?
This is no regular Dictionary Crime, just retro outlines of the past, present,
and the future of antique collectors and noun thieves.
.....
I thought that this was a comedy when she sucked a fly through her nose
catching a spiderweb in her throat, blowing out windless air;
spinning another story for another time.
Author notes
Prompt: What the contest says 
Its up to you to figure out what it really means.
muwhahahaha.
A contest entry
- A Challenge of Absolute Nonsense by Antipodi.
1600 points, ended May 23, 26 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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thats so cool its like watchicn a random movie as soon as i figure out one scene the second one totally stoopifies me ... i like that word haha, so much activity such a busy piece i love it to bits reading your poem is like imagining that i am in willy wonkas chocolate factory or how i imagine it would be haha so so cool
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love what you do
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...um...wow...
...I can't compete with this luvky poem...may I tell you my interpretation of it though?
...stanza one (each separated by dots representing the transfer of jittery...things) represents war...how we crave things such as "nice boots" but we do not really know why and leads to hysteric unhappiness...
...stanza two ponders this thought a little more confused at why people who seem relatively nice even consider attacking...such as a gentle giant retalliating to something which you thought of as nothing that would offend them...
...stanza three puzzles me a tad...first I thought you were talking about lust but the references to the queen made me consider whether you could be sub consciously referring to the god like idolisation of royal figures...and clearly statistics show that does not happen anymore as most high up figures are considered jokes...
..stanza four I'm pretty sure is related to the confusing morality based around suicide (on a sub conscious level anyhoo) how we'd be better off if we were able to remove ourselves from existence without problem...as at the end of the we are going to die and may be dead already (thus the confusion with the zombiness)...
...stanza five is the recitative of the poem...therefore doesn't need to mean anything...probably does I'm just being lazy and just realised if I write this much over a poem I might as well write a book about it...
...stanza six is the confusion via context...how people don't know how to interprete things and whether people percieve things the same way as the mind tells us to? Does it!!?
...yesh...so enjoy your long comment...I have to give them to people every now and then...
Oliver
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You have this really strange way of getting into my
head.
humm... thank you for the comment, actually I really
enjoy getting comments from you, I am having a stressful
life right now and not being able to do something about it
exactly, is just... wow bouts of anxiety ridden.
And man can you write well yourself, a lot better than
what you give yourself credit for... otherwise you
probably would't have gotten a trophy in my contest
if you didn't. I feel like I OKKKKKKK this is just going to
come out kind of blunt, but I love your writes.
Sooooooo I wouldn't want to compete with you, but
that's what makes competition sooooo good, I get to
go up against really talented writers here and I WOULDNT
have it any other way.
You should enter my other contest going on!!
hehehe... but no seriously you do have a strange way
of getting inside my head.
Loves the comment.
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Love the almost references but not quite to stories and rhymes. There was an old woman who thought this was just fine! Great write. Buff
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A really fine response to the prompt, I think, except in one or two places where I had a glimmer of logic... your view of the universe is amazing!
Lita
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Thank you. I think it comes from reading too much.
Haha. Especially Terry Pratchett Novels if you've ever
read them. Their brilliant!! And a mixture of everything
else as well. I don't take phrases in any way, but it
still comes from reading too much.
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Now Lewis Carrol musta gone down the Yellow brick road and had a drink with the Umpa Lumpa's at the rickshaw Pub ...a gr8 write dear poet ...good luck in the competition
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Hahaha!! Thank you for the comment.
It made me giggle.
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GAWD! this was frighteningly amazing!
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Haha thank you. I worked hard on writing it. So thanks
for the nice comment poet.
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