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peace

Prayer is the answer to this world,
Everything will fall apart with out it,
Amen,
CHrist will fix anything,
Everyone is great through Gods eyes.

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  • Trivial Pursuit
    June 21

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    I am not sure if you are being serious or sarcastic, Seriously lol. try explaining how everything will fall apart without prayer and what prayer represents to you. salvation? repentance? Also, how will Christ fix everything? Second coming? will it be what you expect it to be? will you be let down when the time arrives? will you be shocked to see what god does to the sinners? what if someone close to you is a sinner and god punishes them severely? will you still feel the same about god?


  • Shantti
    May 15

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    Nice take on the prompt here
    CHrist will fix anything,

    I believe you meant "Christ".

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