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A Coincedence? I think not.

I knew this was too good to be true,
But lately, you've been out of the blue.
Is it because she wants you back,
or the fact that she has no tact?
Is this a coincedence?
I think not,
Because the way you love me
has got me tied up in knots.
I love you too, And now that i'm free,
this feels like reality,
Finally, something that's a real me.
Is this a coincedence?
I think not.
Because, I am always on the edge,
Standing, ready to jump of the cliff's hedge.
I feel like in the end, before I am ready,
I will all of a sudden lose.
But it's not a coincedence,
because things like this don't happen to me.
But whenever I am with you, I feel so free.
&+I am so happy;unbelievably happy.

great,another sucky poem.

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  • you kall this sucky

    GOSH DANG IT IT IS NOT SUCKY DO NOT THINK THAT I THINK THAT IT WAZ ECECCLENT OK AND THAT IS ALL I HAVE TO SAY ON THIS SUBDGECT LOL I AM NOT MAD at you at all i thought it waz ecceclent i liked it


  • Antebellum
    May 10
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    Line 11... sounds awkward.

    I like this. Its something many can relate to.