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to capture the heart of a bird in flight, 5



I want to do to you what Springtime never imagined it could do
to anything
but I kiss you
to capture
the heart of a bird in flight












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  • Floorboards
    May 28
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    This is beautiful, thanks a lot for entering and good luck.

    Floorboards.

  • Alitare
    May 20
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    Not too bad. I wish you well.


  • poetryality silver member
    May 13

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    This is a beauteous work of poetry. I love the longevity of the first line. The way it is written swooped me into the rest of the poem. Exquisite work poet! I wish you much success in the challenge.


    Much Love ♥

    Renee


  • PerfectImperfection
    May 13

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    AWWW! That is beauty ... There is a pulse, one that resonates between words to the sincerity and adoration of thought within!! Well penned brevity!


  • Night Hope gold member
    May 10

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    This is such a tender & exquisite penning, Scribe. A glorious description, indeed. Good luck in the contest.





  • ChunkyC
    May 10

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    Aww! This is so cleverly cute! Wow! I never imagined that a kiss would parallel with how a bird's heart must feel when it's weightless in the air. You captured this so beautifully with just few short words! Excellent! Wonderful write!

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