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Touch

Your touch,
I desire.....

This longing,
my nightmare....

......never ending urge...

Help...!

This lust,
is controlling me,
making me...........

...undesirable.



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kinda weird not my usual technique...
so ya tell me what you think bout my piece.

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  • XXxXBassMeisterxXxX
    May 10

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    this was trippilly good. i am in a bit of a food coma and it just made it all the better. i liked the last 2 stanzaz "This lust,
    is controlling me,
    making me..........

    ...undesirable"


  • DJshy
    May 10
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    good

    this is good keep up the good work


  • XXPrettyLittleSinXx
    May 10
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    i like it

    i like it alot its different and unique and i think u should keep it up