i cant possibly eat that twix
to stay perfect petit size 6
with my puffy gown and orange skin
for school prom queen i am set to win
my hair bleach blond my boobs enhanced
the other girls dont stand a chance
oh look theres fatty size 16
and coz im harsh and really mean
il tease her and then il feel could
like every evil barbie should
oh daddy dearest pay for this
i want my hair up in this twist
i need that bracelet and tiara
false eyelashes and mascara
but wait whats this
they gave prom queen
to fatty frumpy size 16
she looks obese her hairs a mess
her nails dont look right with that dress
her shoes arent even all that shiny
i know that make are they primani
i dieted for this upheaving day
and my crown ,my title got given away
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haha in your face ellie brown i mite not eb size 6 but id rahter be ten sizes bigger than be a nasty horrid girl like you booooyaaaah in your face.
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we have great hopes for you someday when you grow up - you're so much more than a #, even though some people don't make you feel like it
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honestly this is really stereotypical and cliche. I really don't think that the "prom queen" girls think like this; sounds a bit extreme. I really HIGHLY doubt that 16 year old girls have boob jobs. I think you'll find as you get older that girls don't tease as much when you're in college and such. Maybe once you learn that you'll understand where im coming from sorry if my comment isn't glittering with compliments but it was a little extreme. that's just my opinion.
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ok, if that was you saying that to someone who has a weight issue, i honestly woulda punched you in the jaw hoping you'd be taken away to the psych ward for being such a heartless bitch,.
but it wasnt you.. so thats ok
well done hun
Stick it to the man
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Lol I hope this is a true story. She sounds like a real snatch, that one! Great job with the witticisms and flow. Check that spelling...edit, and it will really be fantastic!
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well sweet6s, what can I say YOU ROCK MY WORLD
this is sooooooo cleverbaby cakes, Im proud as punch
Shine babe, one day the world will know your name
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this is a nice kinda "smack in the face" read. It makes your smile in the silly materialism of this character. There were, however alot of mispellings and lower case i's where there should have been upper case but well done!
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THANK YOU!
Oh man, that was good! like finally somebody said and yess! and being ur self is a universal message cuz beauty is in the eye of the beholder! n jst great job -
EXCELLENT !!!
I, too, am a small person. I am small because I have always been an unhealthy girl. Actually I can still buy most of my clothes from the childrens department. I was always made fun of because I was too small. Even now people , especially men, talk down to me. It is like I have no importance, like there is no weight to my words. I am sorry for the stuff you have to deal with. People that make fun of you are like that. So soon you will grow into a lady and ,no matter your size, or shape, or color, or anything, won't matter. Girls like her were taught by magazine moms.
Peace to you and enjoy life
Jeri -
aha
Way to stick it to her
Great Job
Thanks for Sharing
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Nice write. There are some interesting grammar mistakes that you might want to look over. I don't know how I feel about you calling this Ellie Brown girl "nasty" and "horrid". I guess that's your opinion though, and everyone is definitely free to express themselves however they feel.
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