Oh, Teddy, Oh, Teddy, why can’t they see?
Your precious life meant everything to me.
Boys will be boys, my mom often spoke,
But not all is fun and games or a silly joke.
So there you hang with your head in a noose,
for their dumb silly trick there’s just no excuse.
While they play with their trucks and their toys,
I remember the comfort you gave and the joys.
I’m told to let it go and to suck it up with a grin;
on judgment day God will look upon their sin.
They’ll get theirs now, the whole bloody group.
I’ve gone and put some laxatives in their soup.
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art: A_Little_Girl by Lora8 at Deviantart
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Comments
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aww that is so sweet... that is exactly how a little girl thinks. The ending was pretty hilarious. Very well written. Beautiful
Thank you for sharing this.
All the best to you
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I have too admit I did find this pretty funny! I really enjoyed reading this! Thanks for entering and best of luck too you in the contest! Keep up the good work.
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LOVE IT! The rhyme is perfect, and I LUV the picture. Nice.!.
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Lol what a wonderful ending
I love this piece it's humourous and lighthearted.
Thanks for entering my contest and best of luck to you
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They’ll get theirs now, the whole bloody group.
I’ve gone and put some laxatives in their soup.
lolwonderful.
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nice lol
laxitives... hee hee -
the ending definitly made me laugh... the poem reminds of when another little kid would hide my teddy bear from me... great write. thank you so much for entering my contest and best of luck!
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"So there you hang with your head in a noose,
for their dumb silly trick there’s just no excuse.
While they play with their trucks and their toys,
I remember the comfort you gave and the joys."
These are my favourite lines! Thanks for entering my contest and good luck.
-heva ♫
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omg i read this b4 I made this contest ..great =]
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oh my lol this is funny, poor teddy still got revenge lol thank you for this entry...good luck
Linda
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fantastic
you always write beautifully. -
Oops. Forgot these little guys..
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Wicked little girl! I love it and they won't see it coming!
Thanks for entering.
Michelle
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kuddos
lol you know what makes this really fun to me? not only did my cousin use to hang my stuffed animals in slipknots on trees just like the teddy... but i use to stick laxatives in his brownies when he pissed me off masterful
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Pretty sly for an innocent little waif...lol, oh that sibling rivalry! paybacks...
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LOL! this was really cute and sounds just like something I would have done (the laxatives). good luck in the contest.
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well now that's the way to get even poor guys I bet they won't even see it coming LOL good job and good luck
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LMAO!!! It sounds like she'll get her revenge herself without help from anyone! Great job and good luck.......
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