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**Unfinished**

Passion
Not to be held solely for love
This
Was my mistake

I have a
Passion
For life
One in which
I buried benighted  my troubles

I waited impatiently
For someone to save me
Thinking that I
Was mighty
Higher than anyone else

It's no surprise, then,
That my castle was torn
Down
Bitten by the most venomous snake:
Lust, desire, lies, deceit
I was the farthest away
From being the fairest in the land
Let alone
Being in love

I've never known
LOVE
The real kind
Not just words
Feelings created in my mind
Passion

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I'm trying to get back there again....to writing that is.

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