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Cymbals and drums sound
Rhythm of my heart echoes
Right back to my tribe

~*~

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  • MichaelSavage gold member
    June 13
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    Very worthy of the gold. Congrats and great profound poem.
    Michael


  • IronIcecream
    May 17
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    the tribe of dd size?


  • individuality gold member
    May 12

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    ah the beating of the tribal dance inside the heart-ache-smiles. it's all tattooed in racial memory. the ink of time. a good poem.

    i wouldn't mind a brew tattooed on my tongue, think i will make one