You are to me
the most beautiful thing
with out you in my world
i would just go insane
You are to me
the brightest of stars
ill follow your light
even if it leads me to mars
You are to me
the sweatest of all
and that beautiful aroma
that makes me just fall
You are to me
the definition of intelligence
which with that
you have give me guidance
You are to me
the sun in the sky
that will always shine
even in the clouds of July
You are to me
the love of my life
ill keep you forever
and even after, my wife
Author notes
this was wrote at 2:52 exactly so if its not good let me know i wrote this for rebecca may
yes i know not the best another poem from out of nowhere but its for my love, Rebecca so be hard on me and please criticize
Comments
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ok, one, somewhere in this poem i think you meant sweetest in place of sweatiest, and in your thing above the comment box you misspelled my name. that's about all the criticism i can give you. this was so sweet.



