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-snowdrops-

Love like ours is like ice cream,
melted, splattered in my hair.

Like snocones and rollar blades,
our laughter in the air.


Love like sunlight,
warming my skin.

Like rollar coasters
and the tingling feelings within.


Like screaming children
on a saturday.

Like a beautiful rainbow
on a reiny day.


Or like snoflakes
freezing on lashes.

Unique in each moment
and coming in splashes.

Love like ours is simply there,
always strong, never wavering.

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Written for a contest. Just a poem about love.

~I am nothing, yet I still am.~

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  • love this. absolutely love. it wraps up just about any idea of love I've had lol. I remember my first relationship, which was with a girl, and it was just too sweet for words. Brilliant :]

  • Sweetie, this is absolutely lovely! you did an excellent and amazing job with the description. I'd check your spelling on some things though lol but great job. I feel bad though, I'm removing you. This was for gays or lesbians, not Bi's lol sorriez. Keep up the fantastic writes.
    p.s. I'm so glad y'alls love is so wonderful for you. I'm so happy to see you happy hun *big hugs*
    Luvz ya!

    • Ah, don't worry about the remove, I didn't read the rules carefully enough, so I deserved it.
      Glad you liked it and I'm happy you're happy that I'm happy. @.@ Lots of happiness going around today, ne?
      Anyway, thx for the comment.