Comments made both tongue in cheek,
denim clad with lace
Lips seem to be intertwined,
hand slowly across your face
To slowly dissect cotton mesh,
with the flicking of a clasp
Running through your vivid mind,
and almost in your grasp
The velvet of your ashen skin,
to fingers give a thrill
And set the tone for climbing,
a sparsely covered hill
Hands of magic make their descent,
exploring beaded tat
And culminate in treasured isle,
upon the sultry flats
To quench that longing bittersweet,
to flow the mighty seas
Driving you to raptures edge,
the hottest of degrees
For passion is a rocky road,
traveled best in twos
Emotion mixed with essence,
love is now infused
Author notes
art:sensual seduction... II by ~Freeq22Atdeviantart.com
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Comments
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This is a truly beautiful piece. Both tasteful & erotic. I'm impressed.
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Thank you
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Extremley Steamy
And I really enjoyed this write. The title till the end. The write goes well with the title infused just feels good the way lovemaking should be!! Not overly done but just perfect. Good luck
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Very heated and passionate write here. Excellent display of sensual/erotic flow.
**Master Ktulu** -
Nicely heated pen with a lovely flow.
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Well indeed, you blew the seas apart with this penning.
Great job and best wishes with it.
When the say "apply within" you applied and poured forth the passion that starts juices flowing within
Good luck with this one Rick
Always
Victoria
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