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Third Period Sucks

Sitting,
next to him.
It makes me,
miss you more.

I wanna be,
friends.
Why can't we,
speak?

Butterflies,
flying around.
Thoughts,
buzzing around.

I miss,
the late nights.
I miss,
the phone calls.

I can't even,
hear your voice.
Too long,
without you.

I told you,
I wanted to disappear.
I wanna be,
gone.

Without you,
there is no point.
Promises made,
almost broken.

You said,
I'd never lose you.
Not to,
him.

Baby please,
just talk to me.
One phone call,
one note.

I can't think,
or eat.
I can't even,
sleep.

(can't finish either)

Author notes

me and her aren't allowed to speak to one other..so i tried writing again

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  • I like it

    The flow of it made it easily readable. Great choice of wording. My favorite like was 'Butterflies, flying around. Thoughts, buzzing around.'