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Beauty Emerges

 

American Rubyspot Damselfly

 

Must the damselfly

acquire butterfly wings?

 

“At half-life

Her life begins”

 

The damselfly trembles.

She has heard the trill

of troubadour’s treasures

through intemperate seasons.

 

Gold-dust has gathered from wisteria profusion.

Echoes sound her cartage of wings

as stone-water recesses reach-

yet, new flight hints. 

Uncertain,

she leans back,

even as life flings 

toward new seasons. 

The indolent lake watches. 

 

How fragile she seems,

breathing her still air -

clung, when she alights

on one swaying reed.

 

Weightless

the ache of suspension.

She waits; 

she…waits…

a slow-bellied droplet

unspent toward water.

 

Only when she plummets will she soar.

 

Yet her wings are just tiny wings,

turned to scale, they are

dusty, sheer hide and bone

unfolded papyrus skin.

She ponders her limbs,

as water laps below.

 

Afternoon rain falls over her reverie.

She sleeps.

 

~

 

When she awakens she hears

water whispering: not diminished...

Each wounded carving still there,

formed in svelte, mosaic flesh.

Look:

Wisdom has burnished talismans

etched with the totality of life,

Her amulets shimmer in evening caught light.

 

The damselfly nods to fate iridescent.

Skin and bone still supple

though now fire-forged – majestic.

She hears tree wind whisper:

Leap! Damsel, leap!

Unfolding,

holding -

scrimshawed glories

with ample space for more stories.

 

Catch and lift.

 

First the fall

        then the rise!

 

Well-seasoned wings

stretch in sinuous play.

 

Quietly,

the lake smiles its reflection,

as an expansive cerulean sky

                                       opens

welcoming her epoch flight.

 

~

 

Butterfly wings 

not required.

 

 

 

Author notes

The image of the American Rubyspot Damselfly is gratefully used from Wikipedia's online gallery.

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  • Night Hope gold member
    October 19

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    This is a wonderful penning, Scribe. I especially liked your fourth stanza - your use of language and metaphor. You've painted the canvas well with this piece, my Friend.


  • a good piece of poetry which flows smoothly along the course of creativity, it lingers on the edge of brilliance, shining brightly with poetic bliss. and captures the colours of life, and love. in the folds of heaven eyes shine brightly, wondrously as the sparkled spiralled caress of magnificence sails through the twists and turns of splendid atmosphere. there is a flow that dances along with a smooth rhythm and stylish rhyme.

    • ohhhh....

      yes... I am humbled, and a bit awed... by what you've written. What an amazing, poetic response, individuality....thinking we may have a poetic tango or two etched on our virtual dance cards.

      Wow... wonderfully perceptive, my new friend. I am impressed.

      Thank you! (now I want to figure out how to rate your reply too... it deserves top star)

      smiling...again.

      simone


  • Skybow silver member
    May 9

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    Ah Waterbrother, this dream of flight is simply awesome. One of my favorite stanzas;

    "Gold-dust has gathered from wisteria profusion.
    Echoes sound her cartage of wings
    as stone-water recesses reach-
    yet, new flight hints.
    Uncertain,
    she leans back,
    even as life flings
    toward new seasons.
    The indolent lake watches."

    Butterfly wings not required. Wings, personal flight, that is the whole point I'm getting here. The Damselfly has her own worth and it is immeasurable.

    Great Write, so very well done!


    • Hi, Skyhunny....

      Yep. Why search for gilded ones when the wings we own are perfectly suited? The trick is knowing just how well suited they are... and that they truly do glean a luster as we use them...
      Perfectly suited flight material...no matter what anyone else may believe about 'em. Do you recognize this one? It took a pretty significant re-write, but? I think I like it. Sure care a whole lot the one it's written for. I enjoyed slipping myself into the poem too. Grins

      oh...and I need to learn about the star rating thing here. I'll ask you about it later.

      This is kinda fun, Waterbrother. Me likes!

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