When I don't want to talk, you make me open up
It frustrates me beyond belief
I don't know where I've gone
I used to be alone
But I wouldn't change a thing
My life is so much better with you around
You're always there before I ask
And long before you leave
I pray for just one more minute in your arms
You feel like home whenever you're around
You're just too comfortable
It hurts when you're not around.
My friends all think I'm crazy,
But I'd give up everything for you
Nothing else matters like you do.
You're the one the holds my heart,
From now until the end
You're my lover, and my best friend
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I love how well you can express your feelings; but for a poem, I feel like it could use subtlety. The emotion is too openly expressed, there's no real poetic feeling to it, like I'm reading a diary, or a little love note. That aside, it expresses beautiful emotion, and an admirable resolve.
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