So long love,
I have yet caused you to run away screaming,
The pain inside tears away at my soul,
Heartache slowly seeps into my heart.
I am tired of my own self issues,
Tired of them tearing up and ruining every good thing that comes along,
When will this honestly ever stop?
I try running from this pain I have worked so hard to avoid,
No matter how fast or how far I run,
It always catches up with me.
I warned you over and over to just go before this happened,
You didn't listen and kept faith in me,
Now your fully against me.
I tried to tell you,
I was a stupid boy trying to get involved with you.
You are going to go so far in life,
I'll be thinking of you every step of the way,
I wish you the best,
Hopefully you can forgive this asshole some day.
Please tell me what you think
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I love this anecdote.
You painted your emotions very vividly, and you expressed your ideas well :] -
Thsi poem is beautiful. This is very, very well written and the feelings are very well described. But, in stanzus two in the last line... you don't really need the word honestly.
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I have all the faith in the world that forgivness is the way to happiness. In my life I have learned to forgive the burdens placed upon me. and learned to only carry the ones that bring happiness and help myself and loved ones. i know this sounds dumb and cliche but really darling they'll forgive you and you'll forgive them all in good time.
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