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being broken is only the beginning




i've run up against a wall.
my thoughts are shattered glass that have been
thrown against your palms and have etched stories
that i could've never imagined into your skin.
it's the only way i wanted to feel closer to you.
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i spent hours counting stars.
but they started to fall from heaven after every wish
i made for you. i inhaled them as they dropped in order
to see how it felt to be ontop. my mind stopped and i
realized that with or without hope i would still come out
on the bottom.


i gave up peace for a tragedy.

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i've written less and less..

so enjoy lol even if it's awful

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  • hisaddiction
    July 22, 2009
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    I'm so glad I read this. I'm adding you. I would love to read more!


  • Candy Morphine
    May 10, 2009

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    i spent hours counting stars.
    but they started to fall from heaven after every wish
    i made for you.
    -gorgeous :]



    i gave up peace for a tragedy.
    -i likes this

  • lyrebird
    May 10, 2009

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    This is the opposite of awful.

    my mind stopped and i
    realized that with or without hope i would still come out
    on the bottom.


    I love that.


  • youhadme-athello.
    May 9, 2009

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    i spent hours counting stars.
    but they started to fall from heaven after every wish
    i made for you.

    i love this part.
    this piece as a whole is really very good.
    i really like the ending. nice job!

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