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A line of Poetry

Love may hurt you, but stay true to it and you will be kindled anew. 

Author notes

This one liner is pretty shocking but I thought I'd give it a go.
Cheers,
HJA

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  • Priya1989
    May 9

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    Hi there, thank you for entering my contest.

    I'm glad you decided to give it a go! I wouldn't say that your entry was shocking or rubbish, lol, hopefully the point of the contest was to make people feel uplifted enough to write uplifting poetry! I love the ending of your piece, the 'kindled anew', it certainly flowed well and was positive despite the fact that love may hurt you. I needed to read something like this today, so thank you.

    Best of luck


  • Missmichelley
    May 9
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    ok