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Black Stars

Black stars are falling
Everywhere
All around me
Up and down
In the sky
On the wind
Black stars are falling down.

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Came out of nowhere during a freewrite in writing class. Hope you like.

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  • AllYoullNeverHave
    May 11

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    I like! Good job! I love those poems that just randomly come out of nowhere! Love ya, sis!

    ♥Chelsea