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What Am I Doing?

I am in love with a thought.
I am in love with a lie.
I am in love with you.
What have you done to me?
What have you done?
Go on you acid trips
way from me.
Stay away.
I will scream.
I will yell.
What is going on here?
What has changed?
What am I doing?

I am in love with nothing.
I am in love with a story.
I am in love with a boy.
What have become of me?
What have become of us?
Son of a B*tch,
What have you done to me?
Why is the razor calling?
Why am I here?
Why am I dead?
Where am I?
WHAT AM I DOING?!

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I am in love with you, but what have you done to me?

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  • Alt
    November 4
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    very deep poem. I like how you let the readers feel or know what ur feeling. stay strong girl. I miss u and can't wait to c u again


  • corrupt angel
    May 19
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    A very heart-wrenching write indeed.

    "I am in love with a thought."

    I just adored that particular line, it was interesting. A great way to catch my attention.

    This piece is terribly sad, but in a good way. The "son of a bitch" seems a bit out of place in this poem. It didn't really flow. But other than that I dug the translation between life and death. Great write.