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Our Personal Rollercoaster Ride

To my dearest Mother,

            We had our personal rollercoaster ride,

            suffering the mighty ups and downs,

            and I appreciate the effort you exerted

            in shopping with me - especially

            telling me if I looked awful in something,

            in applying my makeup and laughing with me,

            but also in the finer things, such as

            comforting me when I was hurt,

            not kicking me when I was down,

            bailing me out when I was in trouble,

            but also sharply demanding that I

            grow up, stop depending on you so heavily,

            and to stop being such a childish fool.

            For that, I'll always love you.

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  • Patpowers silver member
    May 9
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    Nice tribute to your mother! Very well penned. THANKS!