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Soulless

This used to be real; there used to be

the tips of your fingers caressing my

frozen cheek, with your smile

as gentle as that day's rainfall,

with your eyes as tender as a baby's skin.

 

Now it's cold; too cold for me to resist

the chill seeping through my heart

and breaking into my core where

the freezing has only just begun

and the pain is still raw.

 

Our souls have numbed in bitterness;

and you're apathetic to my pain.

Now no matter how hard I try I

can't bring back the warm smile

and counter your cold embrace.

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  • Wow. A stunning take on the prompt; thankyou very much for entering and good luck!!

    Maria