Excerpts from My Diary Page Five
She demanded a special gift for her 18th Birthday.
I had nothing.....
on
We met...
skin to skin.
Our lips met together
...upper ones first
lower ones followed suit.
Could there be a better give and take?
What did you think
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Short-but-Sweet
I can't get enough of these short pieces of work. They somehow are more powerful than even the longest, most descriptive poem. You make me wiggle with excitement, I adore your work.
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MaidMistaken
I apprecita your comment...so inspiring and encouraging, my love!
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mmmm...
yummy!
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Swangrnv
Yea....
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A FINE DIARY ENTRY --- WET & JUICY, INDEED!
There is nothing like to meeting of juicy red and pink lips - both above and below meeting in any combination of passion, lust, and love. I look forward to reading more of your diary as you continue to share it with us - right here - on AP! Short and OH SO SWEET as those 4 lips are - and right down to the nitty gritty of the situation.
Love & Peace!
Earl.
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Swtpoetryman
You seem quite experienced. Thank you for the elaborate comment. There are many of diary pages that might be of interest. I believe everyone has certain events in life that are worth description and can be greatly enjoyed if she wants to share it with friends.
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Hot. Short and sweet plus to the point.
Excellent.
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The Drifter
Sometimes it's better to said as little as possible.
Thanks!
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