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Donchaquestionme

Debate infuriates me
Opinions cause me stress
No argument that I can see
Convinces, more or less
How did I get into this state?
A long, long time ago
Quarrelling made me quite irate
Upset me, don't you know
Each question that you wish to ask
Should be in triplicate
To complicate me in my task -
In closing, let me state
Others have tried to question me
Not with complete success
Make speed to leave me, let me be
Elusive, more or less.

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  • I just love the last four lines because it describes how I tend to operate myself.

    Enjoyed your write.


  • Titus gold member
    May 22

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    what's this a love/ hate relationship? It seems to b a mutual thing that is destined for a helluva time. What a read?

  • eamarti
    May 13

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    fANTASTIC

    Hi, Great work, lovely flow and rhyming perfect - brought a smile to my face - good luck inthe contest.

  • Oh I like this one!!!!!!!!!!! And I love the title!


  • MargaretG
    May 9

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    very good

    I wanted insight into this irascible character, who responds with hostility to the merest query. This was fun to read.

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