Damn me for a cack-handed fool:
I still love you...
Despite the utter impossibility of it:
You coming back,
Telling me you won't run away anymore
The arc of an invisible bubble
That pops into and out of my private, silent hymns
And drive me absolutely mad
I cry the polyphonic sequences that yearn for you,
In the face of all sense
To this day:
I dream still, I pray still
For the moment when I can embrace you again,
Wrap you in my arms one more time,
Smell your hair just one last time,
Taste your whisper that says you love me
As much as I love you
Still.
What is the crazy?
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This is completely beautiful...I really felt it...tasted the desperation....love the line
Tste you whisper...that says you love me
This is a really superb piece of are....bravo
T
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bravo
fantastic write and i know that feeling only too well...beyond your own logic and reason calls the undeniable want..more than desire, for me at times borderline inner desperation that could choke me.
thanks for sharing this great piece.
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rememberance
the memory is a powerful thing, mr dania...
this piece is beautiful, though tragic in its truth...
very well written.
"taste your whisper that says you love me"
-ah, the images that come running to me...
thank you for letting us read.
namaste
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this is intense and really well written
heart felt and totally sincere. i love it, really Emma. x
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nice piece keep it up i like it.
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Lovely
This is a great poem. good work. -
You do have a way with words, you know. Good work.
bex
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awwwww how sad this is gio... I can feel the longing in each line!
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this is a good poem
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that was good
tahat wsas a very good poem -
.. Let her go sweetie, she doesn't deserve for you to miss her.
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